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Originally Posted by Aiya
To answer the other concern shown, to my opinion, this is an argumentative essay right. And such essay demands different methods of approach ie: either you choose persuasive style( pick a stance and simply write on that one part using evidence) or you choose exploratory/anaytical style (present both side of the story, take a stance and prove how your stance is better using facts).
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I agree 100% on that. As i said earlier, you sure had written a wonderful essay but the outline could have been presented in a more elaborate way. That is what I think!