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Originally Posted by tayyaba kainat
Outline
• Introduction
THESIS STATEMENT
. Poverty is not a consequence of limited global resources, but political and economic injustice. The rising poverty is the result of poor governance and slow economic growth.
• Condition of poverty in Pakistan
o Report Of UNDP
o SPDC (Social Policy Development Centre) Report
o World Bank Report
o Asian Development Bank Report
o Pakistan’s Planning Commission Report
• Causes of poverty
o Population explosion
o Analphabetic people
o Feudalism
o Unjustness
o Scarcity of jobs
o Corruption
o Division of agricultural land
o Materialism
o Large scale import
o Law and order
o Fluctuated foreign investment
o Privatization
o Moral culture
o Political instability
• Effects of poverty
o Effects of poverty on society
Child labor
De-track from moral and religious values
Crimes and violence
Health problems
Sub-standard lives
o Effects of poverty on country
Terrorism
Debt-trap
Dependence on aid
The social and political discord
Unemployment
• Solutions
• Conclusion
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Your thesis statement does not match your essay.
1. Your essay is "Poverty in Pakistan" and you are talking about global resources.
2. You want to say that resources are not limited but in your essay you didn't provide any evidence for that. You will have to prove that resources of Pakistan are enough to feed it's population.
3. There are no points mentioning flawed economic policies and poor political decision making explicitly which you had claimed to be the cause of poverty.
You can either incorporate these points in the outline or change your thesis statement and make it in accordance with your outline.