Impacted and triggered are different words, and I mentioned to let you know what relevancy is. Income inequality can be checked whether it is a reversible or irreversible phenomenon when COVID will be contained.
There is also a difference between "triggered an end to globalisation" and "globalisation has ended" as you have interpreted. Where have I mentioned that globalisation exists no more? How can you substantiate saving lives and vaccination with the second part which is " triggered an end to globalisation." I mention "way forward" a simple word because point 4 is in contradiction with point 3. Also, point 4 and 5 are more or less pretty much same which is globalisation.
what is the thesis statement?
what is your stance?
Read it even number of times, I can't say what you want to say.
if diversity is there, why are you not mentioning it different points?