Dear Irum,
Thank you for seeking clarification
First of all be assured that there is no problem in meter and wazn of the ashaar.
Their taqteea are perfectly fine.

Sher no 2: I am writing in roman because some people do not read sakin letters properly in urdu so there comes a problem in reading ashaar.

For example the word "khabar" some people pronounce as "khabr" on the meter of " qabr" which is not correct The correct is on the meter " zabAr".
Anyways .....

KhilqAt pe kyun na uska ijaarah bana rahe
haathon mein jiske zulf e rasool e khuda rahe....


Explanation .....

Allah ne sadque mein Mohammad wa aal e mohammad ke kaenaat ko khalq kiya aur unke tasarruf mein de diya.

To Rasool k tasarruf mein kaenaat hai aur Rasool ki zulf Hasnain key tasarruf mein k khud Rasool apni peeth per bitha ker hasnain ko apni zulf thama kr ghutniyon chalte thei.....


Jiske haath mein Rasool ne apni zulf de di to goya apni mukammal ijarahdari de di.


Sher no. 3

Her qatelaan e aal e aba per hain laanatein
Haroon ho ya phir woh abu Sabeghaa rahe.

AAl e aba..yaani ...Chader e tatheer ke neeche aane wale ashkhas yani Imam Husain aur unki auladein jo imam hueein

That means

The killers of Imam Husain and his progeny are cursed be it Haroon Rasheed or Shimr.


Shimr jo qatile imam husain tha uska naam "abu sabeghaa: bhi tha.

Haroon Rashid was an Abbasid Ruler .Abbasids came to power by fighting Bani Umaiyyah on the pretext that Aulade Fatima are the real ones to guide ummaH but once they came to power they were equally bad for aulad e Fatima.

I hope things are clear....if not you are welcome again

regards