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Old Friday, March 10, 2006
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Sentence # 2:

Busharraf, the usage of 'laid up' is incorrect. You could better use 'lying'. Listen, we are concerned with the correction. Do not take a chance by trying to keep up with the original words in the sentence. If you are not satisfied, substitute the words. You can change the tense.

Sentence #3:
It must be 'into' NOT 'in'.

Sentence #5:
There is no word like 'devotely' in the English dictionary.

Busharraf, these are just the mistakes in your sentences. I will present my corrections within a day or two.

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