@Miss AFRMS
Thank you very much for the appreciation.Next time I will try to write under the word limit.

What I learned here after reading the analysis, I am writting in points.
1.my word limit exceeded the required limit.
2.some spelling mistakes.
3.precis in one paragraph
4.dont be verbose
5.avoid using idiomatic expressions.
6.Use one word substitute.
7.avoid grammatical mistakes.
8.Title should be the theme of the passage.
9.Crops can fail http://www.thefreedictionary.com/crop+failure

I will try to model my precis according to the criteria set by you.Thanks

Thanks to all of you who incorporated their valuable analysis.Especially AFRMS, Adil Memom, and Aj Khan.In future We will be looking for the guidance from all of you.

regards