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Salaam,

I am not the examiner myself, but I opine that you probably didn't attempt the paper they wanted you to.

1) I think you discussed useless things in your essay e.g. NFC, water, lack of investment etc. Either I or you have probably misunderstood the topic. I think by socio-economic problems, the examiner means the problems that emerge as a result of interaction between social and economic factors. Like, corruption, health, education, poverty etc. You do not need to discuss the social and economic problems separately.

2) You need not mention the role of Islam in salvation. They didn't ask for it. (This is what I think).

3) The ideal length of an essay is around 20 pages. This might be one of the factors that has entailed your low score.

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