ms sara ,,,well my analysis might be brimfull of brazenly low-witted mistakes

but , despite all my shortcomings i would say 1 thing...... if you had

discussed all the abovementioned sub-heads as the major constituents of

your essay then how much did you endeavoured to strike a balance to justify

those constiuents in their proportional size.... you need not to be extra

rhetoric while pleading your points, it might digress one of the actual

course,,,i mean there have been people around who wrote "iraq-us " war

under the title "islam vs west"....ok if NFC is the major socio political issue of

pakistan then how much its impacting the holistic socio-ecocnomic

scene.....if i write two pages for NFC and one page over something of more

importance than NFC , just because i know about NFC more than wat i wrote

in the other issue, than i would definitley be inviting a trouble.......one more

thing ;i agree to adil that in this topic its the social turbulence emerging out

of economic set up....and we are to give importance to the social

degradation of our society,,,,,not to mention the technical intricacies

involved in all this mess,,,,,,there are five major social institions of paradigm

importance i.e 1)Family 2) religion 3) politics 4)economics 5)and

education....now i will have to write with a balanced approach as to which

institutional value has to be pursued on priority basis in order to create a

harmonious society living in peace and tranquility........well if i say political

stability is more important than economic prosperity than it would be true

w.r.t macro-economic scenario,,, but it will be wrong w.r.t micro-economic

one........another thing; bringing religion into this topic might not be wrong

(though you people may disagree with me to the fullest)............but we will

have to be cautious as to wat are the threshholds for the religious dogmas

which they shouldn't be transcended, well islam is not just a religion its a

complete code of life , ,,so on and so forth....there could be endless debate

over this socio-institutional conversation......but all you need to know is to

clearly and unequivocally mention the points in their proper proportion....and

last but not the least....writing an essay of 10/11 sheets might not be a bad

idea, its all wat you have written in that....i hope i will be corrected for all

wat i might have been overly judgemental........all the best