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Originally Posted by Saleeqa Batool
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Children Have No Childhood in Pakistan.
The real beauty of life lies in childhood, the infant age characterized by innocence, indifference, purity and peace of mind. Children rarely confront the intricacies of life thus enjoy it to fullest in this age. However, encountering the tough realities may blur the colors of childhood and this situation is quite prevalent in Pakistan.
Our country in flooded with socio-economic evils engulfing the beauties and charms of the innocence. Insufficient recreational opportunities, unavailability of free education, scarce resources and status discrimination prevent the kids to enjoy the life.
Poverty is one of the biggest feuds to young angles forcing them towards physical labour .It snatches the shining smiles and steals the redness of pretty cheeks of kids. Poor law and order situation portray the ugly picture of life and ever rising inflation deter the innocent desires to materialize. Summarily, children fell victim to all social evils either directly or indirectly.
Infant age is crucial in personality development. Freud the father of psychology has said that initial five years of age determine one’s path for his upcoming fifty years so if a child has fulfilled needs at that stage would lead a balanced life. A kid has to grow and ultimately assume the responsibility of real life. They are future of nation and by depriving them from sufficient opportunities of recreation, learning and personality development, we not only stand guilty for snatching colors of infancy but also commit the offence of preparing incapable leadership for future.
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