@ new student: Some times it is very easy to identify mistakes in what others write, however, very few of us have the spine to expose their own efforts to others to evaluate. You try to discourage "the elegant" again and again. But as far as I know some times you yourself repeat the same kind of mistakes that others do- for example, in your reply to the_elegant u said 'Dont be stereotyped, say what the passage describes, not your own thoughts.' As far as I know the word 'stereotyped' does not fit in this context. Do not mind!