Ms.Naqvi,
A.O.A.
Oho!itna ghusa!I mean itna mind to shaid examiner bi na karay.Ziada say ziada fail kar day ga candidate ko.Any how,if u think it is all about plagiarism,then its a serious issue and it should be looked into.
I had praised the essay(that u dont even agree that it z an essay)with the comments that ''provided the essay is a self-creativity of the author of the essay''.Dont u think it was a sugar-coated criticism and there was something in it to ponder especially for the said writer.

The technicality is a separate issue.yes,the essay should be written from a lay man's perspective.But the topic became technical when it was taken from psychology's point of view.And since every body is not a master in applied psychology so ppl were not in a position do discuss it from that perspective.
you came late and till that time a lot had already been discussed.

you raised certain critical points but with a slightly harsh tone.However, plagiariasm if there is any,deserved the harsh treatment.

With regards,
ASAD

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