@Princess1
Answers 2 ur qairies.
An essay must b an orignal work of ur own.
You can search internet and other sources only 2 get the material 4 ur essay.
Never copy 4m any source.
Try 2 bring about creativiy in ur style.
It must seem different 4m other competetors.
Only quats can b copied.
It must encite interest to the reader.
Proper organisation and clarity of ideas r the essence of a beautiful essay.
Drug abuse mars personality but ur this point must refer to the youth or poverty riden members of society who have taken refuge under the umbrella of halucination that drug abuse causes.This drug abuse is rather a bigger and different issue then the other anomalies of society. It must b given a seperate paragraph .Here u must also point out the impairment that it causes .but dont go so far while describing D A because it will give an impression to d reader that u have gone boyond the sphere of the main topic.
Your essay has enough points but a hotch potch .
Organise it well and try 2 explain it in ur own style.
Excuse me if u feel harshness in dy words.but thats good 4 u.
Regards