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Dear miss Naqvi my answer to your first question is
yes drug abuse could influence the personality to great extent.


my ans to your 2nd question is that i wrote the individual attributes of personality these are part of personality

my answer to your 3rd question is i not only read it but ALSO printed it in hard copy form but plz tell me that


I HAVE QUESTION WITH EVERY SENIOR MENMBER THAT INTERNET IS CURRENT AND ACCURATE SOURCE OF INFORMATION THAN ABSOLETE BOOKS WHY WE COULD NOT COPY THE ARTICLES AND READY MADE ESSAY FROM NET?

2ND QUESTION IS THAT IS IT BAD TO SEARCH THE INFORMATION.I MADE OUTLINES AND ARRANGE AN ESSAY BECAUSE FOREIGN AUTHER STYLE AND LANGUAGE IS PERFECT.

It was in article written by famous auther so you r saying that there is no coherence in paragraph is it bad to take ready made essay from net?









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sir your point is not valid when u said that it was a harsh critcism. She is good in english so she said it 4 the good of her.(no offence)
i think there should b some one to evaluate our essays critically.
Blunders which r stated in her post r often neglected by the students.
Organization, coherence, conciseness, symetry of paragrphs, avoidence of verbose language,
sticking to one point in one paragraph,
avoidence of irrelevent issues that have no link to the orignal topic_these all r some of the principals wich one should not ignore while writting an essay .
One more thing there r hundreds of thousands of people who r researching in different fields but every one of them can not write a good essay, because its an art not a research paper.
@miss naqvi
we have read ur posts in precis section , where u have a great contribution.
Why r u dormant now a days.plz come up again with fresh zeal to help us in learning _how to write a good essay.
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@Princess1
Answers 2 ur qairies.
An essay must b an orignal work of ur own.
You can search internet and other sources only 2 get the material 4 ur essay.
Never copy 4m any source.
Try 2 bring about creativiy in ur style.
It must seem different 4m other competetors.
Only quats can b copied.
It must encite interest to the reader.
Proper organisation and clarity of ideas r the essence of a beautiful essay.
Drug abuse mars personality but ur this point must refer to the youth or poverty riden members of society who have taken refuge under the umbrella of halucination that drug abuse causes.This drug abuse is rather a bigger and different issue then the other anomalies of society. It must b given a seperate paragraph .Here u must also point out the impairment that it causes .but dont go so far while describing D A because it will give an impression to d reader that u have gone boyond the sphere of the main topic.
Your essay has enough points but a hotch potch .
Organise it well and try 2 explain it in ur own style.
Excuse me if u feel harshness in dy words.but thats good 4 u.
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Oho!itna ghusa!I mean itna mind to shaid examiner bi na karay.Ziada say ziada fail kar day ga candidate ko.Any how,if u think it is all about plagiarism,then its a serious issue and it should be looked into.
Well it wasnt anger but it really the hurt that how could a person perform with this much negligence while preparing for such a prestigious exam. And above all the negligence was out of expectations. There was a time when qualifiers and other prestigious members used to be serious for giving their comments that were guide to the newbies. I visited forum after such a long break and unluckily choosen this thread for having interest. It was more like a shock to me than anything else.

I have no problem if someone is adding an article from net but it shouldnt be added to essay section and members shouldnt invite opinions over it. And if it happens we being seniors are responsible to guide them and realize them that its not a good habit rather make flaunting them for the work not genuinely belongs to them.

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@ Miss Naqvi
we have read ur posts in precis section , where u have a great contribution.
Why r u dormant now a days.plz come up again with fresh zeal to help us in learning _how to write a good essay.
Thanks for your appreciation. Your question of dormancy has only one answer and its professional responsiblities and lack of time. To come up with previous zeal requires ample time as in those days I used to spend almost 4 to 5 hours on forum and now this much time could be a dream only. But yea I will try to come up time to time for quality suggestions.

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Dear miss Naqvi my answer to your first question is
yes drug abuse could influence the personality to great extent.
I have already mentioned that while writing on personality with a general perspective then there is no role of drug abuse. Drug abuse is itself a full fledge topic could be given as essay topic. Yea if you had related it to " The factors interfere normal functioning of personality." While writing essay you have to tackle it in a way that examiner should get your mastery and understanding of the topic you have choosen. And if you are going into extra details of irrelavent things then it would leave a bad impression.

If you have studies the topic you must have realize that its very hard to manage such a detailed topic because while writing about theories there are detailed components presented by each school of thought. You have to give the definition of personality from each school of thought to clarify it thus, if you going into drug abuse you have to touch so many other things much more important then this.

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my ans to your 2nd question is that i wrote the individual attributes of personality these are part of personality.
Again I would refer you to the answer of your 1st question. Individual attributes as you have presented in that article are so vague and define nothing but add words and lose impression.

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my answer to your 3rd question is i not only read it but ALSO printed it in hard copy form but plz tell me that
Well i still believe that you havent read it and if you had read then it shows that you were already occupied with other things thus couldnt comprehend it.

As far as your question of copying material from net is concerned then there is no harm in it but the thing that you have to keep in mind is, your creativity. Internet is really a great source to collect material but offcourse you have to skim it out at your own. The material you are collecting must serve to gather ideas, grasp the concept and should support your personal ideas to enhance its meaning.

Mere copying the material from net and pasting it to the forum under guize of your name and then soliciting comments is an act that has damaging impact and you yourself can realize its severity.

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It was in article written by famous auther so you r saying that there is no coherence in paragraph is it bad to take ready made essay from net?
Look Princess when you are picking up things without context and donot realize that under which cover you are presenting it make mess of even best thing. Just tell me when you are looking for desert and you are offered spicy dish at the name of desert would you say that its the problem of taste? not at all rather its the matter of choise and need. So when you are writing an essay and presenting ideas in the manner of sociological / psychological thesis then its not a good practice.

Please no offense all my answer is to improve your skills and realize you the importance of self-creativity.
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