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Originally Posted by newstudent View Post
I would comment on the passage directly as how it develops its argument.

1. Most of scientists accepted Darwin's theory which considers physical force as the main criterion.
2. Psychologists focused on man's psyche and remained ignorant of man's physical self.
3. No synthesis has been made between two views.
3. Resulting in man's image to be just an economic being, based on concepts of communism and capitalism.
4. Man is now technologically powerful but not as much cultured.
5. This irrational situation resulted in several questions about man role as seen from political and religious views. It is because man is not analyzed as whole.

Precis should be developed on the above lines. Because passage is argumentative so should be the precis.

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So, other than argumentative precis.....give me some more mistakes i made in it
so that i cud take corrective actions
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