@Sabah Hunzai and Rishz
I was a bit busy, asking same kinda help from my seniors
. Main khud bi hairan hon kyon dosre seniors aap logon ki madad nahi kar rahe. As I have my own way of critically analyzing precis and others their's. The more input you get the better it is.
Sabah Hunzai, I have seen your precis, if I remember correctly I have checked that sometime ago. So no more comments.
Regards