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Well think-tank im reffering to is of psychologists and scientist but ur right i shud have mentioned it, i took examiner my best friend here,lolzz THANX again ur points were upto the mark. i wll work over it...Regards |
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Sarah shah (Monday, February 01, 2010) |
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the errors you identified in my precis are well taken by me. I think we can keep commenting on each effort to make the learning reciprocal process. yes, you are right am not giving proper time to precise practice due to obsession with official duties. I hope things will improve gradually. just pray
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Comment on it please.....
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Science and Psychology, besides their contributions, so far have lacked a holistic approach to life. Former has emphacised phyical forcess of man ignoring his mental faculties, while the later focused human psyche only. These exclusive approaches have given birth to a society with economic imperatives. The Capitalism and communism, two leading concepts of this society, have ruined man culturally. They have given man physical strenghth and temporal bliss but made him culturally backward. Science's engagement for exploration of natural forces for the destruction of human specie, has made the world fearful. This has invited man for serious deliberations on different roles and for a holistic appraoch. Title: Need for a holistic approach to Human life. words:104
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Thankyou Rishiz, Subah Hanzai and New student for ure response.. I don't know why FPSC has to check our abilities by giving these philosophical passages.. they have to check our skills of brevity, these skills can be checked with easy-to-understand passages as well. What you say guys?
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rishzzz (Sunday, January 31, 2010) |
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But kiya hai na v have to adapt us according to exams....so that's why glass breaks at our head
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Science and Psychology, besides their contributions, so far have lacked a holistic approach to life. Former has emphacised phyical forcess of man ignoring his mental faculties, while the later focused human psyche only. These exclusive approaches have given birth to a society with economic imperatives. The Capitalism and communism, two leading concepts of this society, have ruined man culturally. They have given man physical strenghth and temporal bliss but made him culturally backward. Science's engagement for exploration of natural forces for the destruction of human specie, has made the world fearful. This has invited man for serious deliberations on different roles and for a holistic appraoch.
dont use again same holistic approach but replace with some other the statement u mentioned above (highlighted) is not which writer meant to say, culture is not exactly ruined, i think it is being ignored at the cost of scientific and psychological developments or so.... Comment: Very Good, you have improved a lot, n ur expression woth appreciation, i personally liked ur precis
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thanks for identifying mistakes.. I don't know why seniors have turned their heads away from us. they are not commenting.
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any hw v shud keep on cheking each other, will i.a get smthn in return Yar its ok dnt wry, ve ll have to practice a lot to make our hands and fingurs like iron to attempt for six hours in a day
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Sarah shah (Monday, February 01, 2010) |
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@Sabah Hunzai and Rishz
I was a bit busy, asking same kinda help from my seniors . Main khud bi hairan hon kyon dosre seniors aap logon ki madad nahi kar rahe. As I have my own way of critically analyzing precis and others their's. The more input you get the better it is. Sabah Hunzai, I have seen your precis, if I remember correctly I have checked that sometime ago. So no more comments. Regards |
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