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Originally Posted by Sabah Hunzai
War on Terror
1. Introduction (words 100)
2. On Defining Terrorism (200)
3. Roots of Terrorism(100)
• Political roots of Terrorism(200)
• Economic roots of terrorism(200)
• Cultural roots of terrorism(150)
• Religious roots of terrorism(200)
4. Contemporary Apprach to Counter Terrorism(300)
5. Downsides of the Approach(300)
6. A Wayout for Countering Terrorism (100)
• Resolution of political issues(300)
• Promotion of cultural and religious pluralism(200)
• Equality of nations through economic reform policies(200)
• Empowerment of International organizations(200)
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Your outline is fine.
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Originally Posted by Sabah Hunzai
Conclusion (206)
Issues can not be soloved with further exploitation of power by using force. It can be resolve through dialogue.
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Write....Issues cannot be resolved with further exploitation or coercion. They can be resolved through dialogue.
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Originally Posted by Sabah Hunzai
For having dialogue numerious organizations have been created on both regional and international level, but without hands and brains of their own. Strengthening international organizations and neutrality of all countries in the dialogue process is sine-qua-non. But, the question of enormous importance is, will the supper(super) powers shed their vested interest embeddied(embedded) in the global issues? If yes, then our globe will, indeed, be a worth living place again, without the element of terror.
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Instead of "super powers" write...western powers
Instead of "our globe" write....our planet
Overall, your attempt is very good. Keep it up.
cheers,
floydian
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Last edited by Andrew Dufresne; Monday, February 08, 2010 at 07:55 PM.
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