It is the blinking fact that terrorism has proved to be an Achille's heel for the prestige and dignity of Pakistan as it has affected every sphere of life and jeopardized the peace of the region.The lack of good governance , sectaranism , alienated groups , unemployment , and lack of political stability have largely contributed towards the growth of terrorism mainly by ridiculizing the youth.The measures adopted by the government to handle this global problem are good-deserving but much more is required to address the root causes which served as the breeding grounds for terrorism i.e socio-economic development of masses.The media must play its effective role in moulding public opinion in a right way through tolerance and mutal-coperation .The process of dialouge must be resumed as it is the only way for resolving the conficts in unbaised approach through census like 3D approach of government i.e Dialouge , Detterence and Development.Terrorism has affected the economic , social , political and private life very much.The regional coperation among South Asian countries is the dire need of the hour as otherwise terrorism would detoriate the regional peace which is one of the objectives of terrorist groups.



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Nice attempt aurkn.

But you won't get any significant marking on this conclusion because I found it to be disconnected, scattered and confused. You started very well but then you wandered like a nomad. In other words it lacks unity and logical pattern. Overall the grammar was alright though.

cheers,
floydian

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please comment on my outline and conclusion, it is here in the same thread.

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Your outline is fine.

Write....Issues cannot be resolved with further exploitation or coercion. They can be resolved through dialogue.

Instead of "super powers" write...western powers

Instead of "our globe" write....our planet


Overall, your attempt is very good. Keep it up.

cheers,
floydian

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Conclusion:

The problem of terrorism is getting worse with time. Terrorists have strengthened their network, and the magnitude of their notorious activities has markedly increased in the South Asian region. Why is it not possible for bulk of army, deployed in the AfPak border, to contain rising terrorism is one of the serious questions to look into. One may conclude that this movement is operating under the auspices of World powers, to whom unstable Pakistan Is more favorable to carry out their hegemonic designs. For their diverging interests, global players are fueling terrorism, causing instability in this region.
If the problem of terrorism is further allowed to spread in this region, it would absolutely get out of control and may get a potential to smash the stability of Pakistan. Pakistan may become war-torn region nothing different from Afghanistan. It would provide an excuse for the international community to take over its nuclear assets- a potential on which World powers already have their bad eyes. Such monstrous prospects call every member of civil society to take pains and pressurize the government to seriously take this issue. Seriousness doesn’t mean more military actions but a mixed and wise solution with a pragmatic approach. There is no substitute of public cooperation and seriousness of the government available. No alien or a miracle is coming to save Pakistan, and the people must not be waiting for any tabled solution. Laxity would not be working here. A sound, stable and viable Pakistan lies in the solution of terrorism with iron hands and firm determination.

@All....
Kindly comments on my outline,, i m waiting

@Nayab
dear its a good outline.only a friendly suggestion,make ur expression a bit sophisticated,e.g for the last point in ur suggestions rather say it in these words:efficiant use of energy at domestic level etc.i hope its useful advicer.Regards

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Conclusion:

Terrorism:

The problem of terrorism is getting worse with time. Terrorists have strengthened their network, and the magnitude of their notorious activities has markedly increased in the South Asian region. Why is it not possible for bulk of army, deployed in the AfPak border, to contain rising terrorism is one of the serious questions to look into. One may conclude that this movement is operating under the auspices of World powers, to whom unstable Pakistan Is more favorable to carry out their hegemonic designs. For their diverging interests, global players are fueling terrorism, causing instability in this region.


If the problem of terrorism is further allowed to spread in this region, it would absolutely get out of control and may get a potential to smash the stability of Pakistan. Pakistan may become war-torn region nothing different from Afghanistan. It would provide an excuse for the international community to take over its nuclear assets- a potential on which World powers already have their bad eyes. Such monstrous prospects call every member of civil society to take pains and pressurize the government to seriously take this issue. Seriousness doesn’t mean more military actions but a mixed and wise solution with a pragmatic approach. There is no substitute of public cooperation and seriousness of the government available. No alien or a miracle is coming to save Pakistan, and the people must not be waiting for any tabled solution. Laxity would not be working here. A sound, stable and viable Pakistan lies in the solution of terrorism with iron hands and firm determination.

@ irfan_ali

Excellent attempt bro. Just one suggestion, give some credit to the government efforts on war on terror. This way you keep it more balanced.

regards,
floydian

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dear I made a detailed critique but due to sudden electricity breakdown all went to hell.

I just remember the comments which i made.
you once talked about south asia and then about pakistan. be limit yourself, you can't play a whole tournament, rather you have to play a single match.

in giving a judgement you said, one may conclude..... it may be an opinion, but what did you conclude is the real matter.

''potential threat'' in above bolded are seems more suiting

you only wished for a stable pakistan but you didn't make a strong recomendation or suggestion. please give a viable solution of your own and defend it why you think it is so important.

i hope these may help you to make it more convincing.

cuz we have to convince the empire "assessor" whether we have clean bold the essay or not.
regards

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