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Originally Posted by Noor_2009 View Post
i wrote can women be equal to men in Pakistan?


Outlines

Introduction

about equality and women condition etc as i did mention all in my essay


can women be equal to men in Pakistan

women is not equal to men in Pakistan but she can be equal to men in Pakistan
we shall have to see all those places where she has not equal rights
then we can explain how can she be equal with men in Pakistan
women status in Pakistan

Faces of inequality of women in Pakistan
Women in home
Women in society
Women in education
Women in politics
Women in jobs
Women in culture
Women in economy
Women in equality in decision making

Poor women
Women inequality in relation

Women as sister (as compare with brother)
Women as wife ( as compare with husband)
Women as daughter ( as comparer with son)
Women as mother ( as compare with father)
Government steps

Politics, law, NGOs , Education and in jobs fix quota

Suggestions


Pakistan a Islamic country
Islamic principles should be follow
Orthodox Muslim thoughts should be discourage
Education should be necessary
Women should remove her fear
Women should know about her rights
Brother should be cooperative
Husband should be cooperative
Father should be cooperative
Law and order condition should be better for women
Women should be courage in decision making
More quota for jobs should be increased for women
More sets should be reserved in parliament
Women should be courage in economy field
Narrow mind thinking should be change
Media should play its role
Women can play better Role in country progress

Conclusion


criticism will be welcome....
Noor, you have attempted essay very well. There is no major blunder or deviation in your outline. You have rightly touched all the dimensions of the essay with proper balance. I don't see any thing excessively risky in your attempt.

Wish you best of luck. You have passed Essay paper. Now concentrate on the remaining papers. Mark my words if you have attempted essay in the same manner as you have outlined here in forum then no body can cause you fail in this paper.
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