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Originally Posted by Saleeqa Batool View Post
i started with the following line

The idea of negotiations with terrorists sounds contrary to commen sense, yet the apparent faliure of allied forces make us to believe that dialouges are indispensible to eradicate bring peace.

The remaing essay hovered around this idea with out any refernce to history.
If you have written same sentence in the paper then unfortunately you have made 3 grammatical as well as spelling mistakes in the first line.

Well historical evidences are quite important but i think your essay is not that much confusing and it will fetch good marks. If you have written grammatically correct english, your essay will get good response from examiner. Now that you have done it, go and prepare next papers. I think this is not the right time to evaluate everyhting that you have written. It may affect your coming papers.
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