Thread: "Waqt" by Abdussamad Chaudhary
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Old Thursday, July 22, 2010
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Originally Posted by chabdussamad View Post
Dear All,

Please comment on it as I am not a perfect poet and need suggestions for improvement. I need special attention of senior poets as critics.
Thanks a lot.
the word used in second line adraak it means ginger.correct me if i m wrong.
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