Beete dino ka pachtava to azaab hota hai,
Par jate dino ka adraak bhi nayaab hota hai.

Suhana hai ye waqt k so to skte hein,
Umar hai aisi, barra har khaawb hota hai.

Lae gi zimadari, jb khawbon ki taabir nikle gi,
Hota ha bohat ehm, har kam phr be-hisaab hota hai.

Koi b waqt hota nahi haal se acha,
Mustaqbil to hamesha ek suraab hota hai.

Azmaesh hai ye dunia, hr ek ko hai taklif,
Kahan har ek ko muyassar Bistar-e-gulab hota hai.

Jo bhi krna hai SAMAD, aaj he krna hai,
Baad-azaan to waqt yaadon ki kitaab hota hai.

Beete dino ka pachtava to azab hota hai,
Par jate dino ka adraak b nayaab hota hai.

By: ME (SAMAD)


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Dear All,

Please comment on it as I am not a perfect poet and need suggestions for improvement. I need special attention of senior poets as critics.
Thanks a lot.

Furthermore, if you have said your poems with the same theme and idea then please let us read by posting that valueable poem here.
Thanks a lot.

the word used in second line adraak it means ginger.correct me if i m wrong.

@ Samad.......
well its a nice one.... I liked it espicaly
Beete dino ka pachtava to azaab hota hai,
Par jate dino ka adraak bhi nayaab hota hai.

@6561
your love my bro. Thanks/Navazish.

@seep
just to avoid such confusion I used 2 "aa" in the words. "Adraak" means "to perceive/perception, to acknowledge".
It means that it is hard to acknowledge the importance of present or the time which, just, is passing away or every passing second.

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Fixed signs.

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You really were not an ordinary man Samad. The views presented by you speak volumes of your character. "Suhana hai ye Waqt K so to Sktay hain"

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Sang-e-Giran' hain Raah main Hayil to kya hua
Manzil chupee hui to meray Hoslon' main hai . .

Hamary dukh sy ziada ap ky chahry ki muskrahat bari pyari thii apny Khaliq ky pas jaty waqt. Ap apni fatah py muskraty huwy is fani dunia sy rishta tor gae aur Haqeqi Malik ky pas chaly gae.
Victorious smile on his face in his funeral video proves the worth of a SHAHEED Jawan.

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"Tumhary nafs ki qeemat Janat hay isy Janat say kam qeemat pey na bechna."
"Jiyo to istarh ky log tum sy milny ko tarsy; maro to istrah k log tumharee mot par royain"