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Originally Posted by Shahid Shakoor
Plz All seniors,juniors and who cleared css written exam plz comment and give your worthwhile comments.Specially on 1st paragraph that how it should be start.Ist sentence of 1st paragarpgh of essay does matter???if yes then what would be your reccommendationz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Islam, A religion of peace
Outline
The very word Islam means peace
The cardinal message of Islam is love, tolerance, patience, humanity and simplicity.
Islam despises sectarianism, extremism and bigotry.
Islam has always been a target of hatred by the west which perceives islam as religion of fundamentalists, extremists and fanatics.
Basically, there are two main reasons for this against islam:
i. This is a viscous propaganda which has been unleashed by western media and western rulers.
ii. On the other hand, this is also the result of irrational,un reasonable and extremists activities of some of the misguided Muslim outfits.
Jihad has been the mere misunderstand word and is only taken for violence and fighting.
Basically jihad stands for Goodness and struggle with in oneself and society.
There is another propaganda going on that muslims become violent as soon as they grew in numbers.
As far as this criticism is concerned there were some fundamental reasons for fighting wars.
How theoretically islam has preached peace
1. first of all islam recognizes all the civilizations of world
2. Islam does not allow the use of force in the matter of faith.
3. islam condemns lawlessness
4. Islam condemns extremism of all kind
5. islam calls reconciliation through negotiation a victory
6. islam prefers forgiveness over revenge
7. war is the only last option in islam
8. Islam gives full rights to zimmnies
Practical aspects followed by the Muslims to preach peace.
1. Madina Agreement with Jews
2. Sullah hudabia
3. Exemplary attitude of muslims at the conquest of Makkah
4. Conquest of Jerushalam
5. Muslim tolerant and peace ful rule in spain
6. Muslim ruler Salhuddine attitude during the crusades
7. Muslim Rule in India
Islam has promoted peace by introducing certain reforms with in society at political, economic and social fronts.
A. Political reforms
1. No opposition in islam
2. Islamic principles point towards democratic
3. Form of Government
4. No room for inheritance
5. Open Access to rulers
6. Cheap justice
7. Human Rights
8. Full rights to minorities
9. Islam introduced reforms with reference to war
B. Economic reforms.
1. Islam believes in equal distribution of wealth
2. Islam wants eradication of Poverty
3. Islam Adopts Different measures to promote economic activities.
C Social Reforms
1. Formation of brotherhood and fraternity
2. Islam Promotes education
3. Islam gives full rights even to slaves
In a nutshell we all Muslims must be united to counter this viscous propaganda launched by west to malign the image of Islam, a religion of peace.
Essay
The very word Islam means peace. It is a religion of peace and love. The cardinal message of Islam is love and fraternity, peaceful relations with all, honoring of pacts and treaties and no aggression. Islamic theories prevailed peace and love over the world. All the towering figures of Islam followed the golden principles of Islam and spread the message of Allah through out the world. Islam is entirely incompatible with terrorism. Islam has facilitated a Golden age of scientific discovery all over the world. It is only Islam which tolerate to all other religions.
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Try to start your essay with any relevant Ayat from Quran Pak which clearly suggests brotherhood, peace and tranquility. In this way you can gain the attention of reader. That Ayat should lead you towards complete essay. That Ayat should serve a purpose of Thesis statement (Hypothesis to be proved with valid arguments, evidences, explanations, illustrations and comparison during the whole essay.
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Islam has always been a target of hatred by the west which perceives islam as religion of fundamentalists, extremists and fanatics.
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Do not indulge into blame game and never jump to criticize Western block or Non-Muslims. This shows your inner feelings which are driven by your emotional state of mind which is prone to biasness. Do not out rightly blame over them for defaming or causing harm to essence of Islam. We all know, they have always played a prejudiced role but topic of essay doesn't demand to explain specifically the factors of conspiracy against Islam. This is in our unconscious state of mind that Western block is against Islam and is involved in aggression over Muslims that is why you have hurriedly turned your essay towards West and started justifying your stance as you were asked to counter argue allegations of Non Muslims.
No doubt, you cannot live without discussing west or Non Muslims in this essay because implied message of topic do require inclusion of opposite side too. It would be better if you explain fully the essence of Islam with proper illustrations and evidences and bit by bit insert the flow of opposite factors which term Islam as a religion of violence. This should be clubbed wisely with impressive linkages and justifications but directly justifying your stance in the light of West's conspiracy shows weak linkage and mismatching theme.
Ending paragraph has again resulted in a blunder which is the main cause of failure of majority of the candidates in essay. Essay topic was neither "Islam vs West" nor it was "Muslims vs West"/Threat to Islam from West. So ending your essay with following para invites the paper checker to use his guns and penalize you in result.
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In a nutshell we all Muslims must be united to counter this viscous propaganda launched by west to malign the image of Islam, a religion of peace.
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End of your essay should again revert back to the introductory points and should not contain your emotional message. Forget west in the end just praise Islam with valid and sensible quotes/verses/Ahadees in the prism of peace.
Work on your grammar and sentence structure because your introductory para shows your weaknesses in this area.
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The very word Islam means peace. It is a religion of peace and love. The cardinal message of Islam is love and fraternity, peaceful relations with all, honoring of pacts and treaties and no aggression. Islamic theories prevailed peace and love over the world. All the towering figures of Islam followed the golden principles of Islam and spread the message of Allah through out the world. Islam is entirely incompatible with terrorism. Islam has facilitated a Golden age of scientific discovery all over the world. It is only Islam which tolerate to all other religions
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Last edited by Raz; Wednesday, November 03, 2010 at 10:47 PM.
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