Thread: Plz check and comment on my outline and Ist paragarph.
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Old Friday, November 05, 2010
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Bundle of thanx.Raz bhai your comments are very useful for me.the purpose of pasting essay here serves by your comments.

What are your reccommendations to improve my sentence structure plzzzzzzz?????
How one can improve sentence structure?????

plz share your reccommendation?????????

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