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Originally Posted by Eshmile
avoid "I", "LETS" etc.stay to the topic, dont give such an example whr u forgot the source or the name or else handle it tactically. plus give sound examples, quotes, etc dont just rely on common sense. I read about half of the essay but In my opinion i might be wrong but the examiner will not pass this essay.
work on ideas brother!
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I would second this responce.I just read ur intro and i m of the view that this essay is in no way up to the mark.