It is another story attempted by candidate



There is a table in the room, a jug and a glass on table and a boy is looking from window inside the room

story:

It was beautifull evening of spring. The atmosphere was filled with fragrance and melodious songs of birds. The children were enjoying their weekend. Sunny was playing cricket with his friends.The while making a shot, the ball went to neighbours home.Now they don't have any option except to bring their ball back as they don't have any extra ball. Sunny knocked at neighbours door for ball but they were not at home. So he decided to use other way. He climbed across the wall and searched ball but to no vain. in the given picture, he is watching inside from the window in search of ball. Suddenly he saw his ball at right corner of the room. He planned to go inside but his innerself stopped him from entering without permission. He felt bad for climbing the boundary wall in the absence of house owner. He went back with heavy heart and decided to tell the truth to his neighbours as soon as they come back.
the moral is we should try our best not to interfere in anyone's personal, and always give value to yhe voice of "inner self". This is what Iqbal said in his poetry that Muslims should awaken their inner self and spirit.

Dear it is excellent effort.

Such words like

BEAUTIFUL, FAGRANCE, MELODIOUS, ENJOYING,
It is good to mention any moral. If u dont mention any moral, then dont worry,

U should also mention the purpose of jug, glass and table.

U gave explanation only about boy.

short the story of boy , add sentences about jug, glass and table, also mention the purpose of room.

U can say that it is the dinning hall of a welfare orgnization.

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