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Originally Posted by drastic
sir mussa  i done it..check dis 2..... Regards |
a poor piece of writing. First of all in the opening you should explain the maxim.but you discussed only the first part in three to four lines. Even after reading the whole passage you cant get the the theme of the passage . Ok now just do one thing read the whole passage again and suggest a title for it.
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Originally Posted by sadozai
A hard working Chinese
Diligent efforts of human resource made China a economic giant. There was time when Chinese society was entangled with number of social evils, but the Communists revolutionized the very structure of the Chinese society and inculcated the gene of productiveness in their people. And by dint of laborious work of 60 years, the china is now commanding the economy of the world. For instance, the small houses of industrial province of China turned into full-fledge factories and are doing their best to improve economy of China. Moreover, The Chinese government officials are also putting their maximum efforts to ensure barrier-less business in their mother land. In the words of Thomas Alva Edison " There is no substitute for hard work" and the case of China authenticated it. Thus, Chinese destiny was alter by its industrious human resource.
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Dear just buy a good book to understand how expansion should be made.its not a well written paragraph
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