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Old Sunday, December 19, 2010
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Originally Posted by mussaa View Post
a poor piece of writing. First of all in the opening you should explain the maxim.but you discussed only the first part in three to four lines. Even after reading the whole passage you cant get the the theme of the passage . Ok now just do one thing read the whole passage again and suggest a title for it.
A poor piece of writing in which sense? I didnt get that... u just tell me about the intro.... n what is next? my examples are irrelevant or wht is other fault?
N U SAID ME to give a title of this passage .... tell me in a extensive way....
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