It is not a precis. It is an expansion of a statement or an idea or a proverb.

Bear in mind three steps:

Introduction: Improve your introduction and make it more statement centric.

Body: The detail of crop and farmer is unnecessary. Please stick to the point.

Conclusion: Try to conclude in better way and end on the note of the proverb itself, "It is clear from above elaboration that a man's gain is equal to his efforts hence, As You Sow, So Shall You Reap".

Thank You!

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