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Old Tuesday, February 22, 2011
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As You Sow, So Shall You Reap

‘As you sow, so shall you reap’ is a proverb which means that actions or deeds of a person repay him/her in kind.
Seeds are the grains of a crop harvested at the maturity of the crop. These seeds are sown in the field to multiply them through reproduction. If seeds are healthy, these will produce healthy plants and they will produce a good crop. Contrary to this, if one sown weak and diseased seeds, there are chances that plants emerging from these seeds will be weak and diseased as well. The output of the farmer is dependent on the quality of the seeds and manner of sowing.
Our actions and deeds are like seeds. We are responsible for the consequences of our action. Good actions produce good results whereas bad actions produce bad results. A person who sins throughout life, cannot expect salvation. A student who wanders throughout the year cannot think of topping in the examination. If a person is spreading through charity and kindness, it means he is sowing the seeds of happiness. It means that good things happen to those who do good work and bad things to those who indulge in doing bad things.
Every discipline has its own demand and until one fulfils them, one cannot reach anywhere. Rise and success in life demand labour, effort and toil. A good result is a manifestation of intense efforts that have gone into its making. A lazy person cannot achieve anything good as long as he does not exert himself.
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Old Tuesday, February 22, 2011
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It is not a precis. It is an expansion of a statement or an idea or a proverb.

Bear in mind three steps:

Introduction: Improve your introduction and make it more statement centric.

Body: The detail of crop and farmer is unnecessary. Please stick to the point.

Conclusion: Try to conclude in better way and end on the note of the proverb itself, "It is clear from above elaboration that a man's gain is equal to his efforts hence, As You Sow, So Shall You Reap".

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