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Originally Posted by Shahid Shakoor
nice effort by you sister...i read this one(precise 2008) which is nicely tackle by you specially like this"These demands are assessed through customer surveys by organizations like Municipal and Highway Commissions to ascertain the most beneficial projects".in this you summarised well.
but as far as Title is concerned,if it remained within two or three words then it would be better.
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u know what I am a business graduate and I was laughing while reading this passage, because they have used too much of un-necessary words which can be substituted by one term or two. moreover, the structure of the passage is so absurd. so I guess, there should be a thorough analysis of sentences and sentence fragments