Originally Posted by aliraza171

my outline
1-there is a dire need to bring serious attention towards organisation and ineffectiveness of disaster management and state preparedness
2-reasons of failure of disaster management and state preparedness
a-lack of modern technology in the concerned departments
b-lack of interaction between concerned depts and people
c-lack of interaction among concerned depts
d-corruption and mismangement
e-lack of trained officials
f-fear of dismissal among officials of disaster management(because mostly of them are hired on contract basis)
3-govt steps
a-establishment of ndma
b-establishment of rescue 1122
c-establishment of fc and erc
d-i forget
4-solution
opposite to reasons of failure

5-conclusion
i m not much confident about my essay because my essay was spreading on 17 pages including 4 pages of outline.
and in the end i hurriedly and mistakenly wrote the words of essay i.e approx 1200.