nice outline .. you deviated a bit , but some points raised by you are exceptional .. I also attempted the same essay .. Lets see how we are treated

Dear Topic was just confined to women in the house of Pakistani society as either an angel or source of all evils. Many of the friends have attempted with regards to rights, duties, persecution, status etc of the women, but to me topic demanded two things.

1. As an angel: when she takes care of her children and bring them up well, looks after needs of husband, remains loyal to family's dignity, manages economic affairs efficiently, and does not create rift between in laws and husband, she makes the house the Heaves. Thus she is considered angel in the house.
2. As source of all evils: Take a UTURN of above aspect, she is source of all evils then.

I might be wrong, but general perception among my senior members is likewise.

Brother i think you commented without checking my outline. If one is source of evils, definitely, she is persecuted in return. And here the topic is about society which does not limit to family but our whole society. More specifically, the essay is assigned for the treatment of society towards woman in pakistan.

u might be right dear, but the fact remains we are expected to write on what is given and not implied narrative. Anyways, best of luck.

i complain with due respect to all active members that none of them have commented on my outline.i again request to all members to comment on my outline.

Dear Do not worry about ur mentioning of words at the end. One of my friends is under training and in none of his attempts he made outline of essay and in the fine attempt, he even did not write topic of the Essay. So there is no need to worry about that. Done is done now and it is useless crying over split milk. Have faith in urself and Allah's mercy and blessings.

Regards

i chose Women's essay....Please Senior Members check my outline...is it right or not????

Outline:

1) Introduction
2) Women In Islam
3) Women's Status As a Mother/Daughter/Wife
4) Women's Role in Family
5) What Islam Says About Women's Education?
6) Sir.Syed Views About Women's Education
7) Women As a Witness in Islam
8) Women in Pakistan
9) Status Of Women In Pakistan
10) Changes The Status Of Women In Pakistan
11) Political Contribution By Women
12) Achievement of Various Women's Group
13) Women As a Head
i) In Politics
ii) In Mass Media
iii) In Judiciary
14) Problems Faced by Women In Pakistan
i)Karo Kari
ii)Vani
iii)Domestic Abuse
iv)Honoured Killing
v)Rape
vi)Abduction
vii)Burn Faces by Acid
15) Women Enjoying The Rights in Pakistan
i)Equal opportunities of Job
ii)Equal opportunities of Education
iii)Equal Remuneration to Men
iv)Right to obtain Divorce
v)Freedom to opt Partner
16) Suggestions
17) Conclusion

[QUOTE=sweety Sadi;280883]i chose Women's essay....Please Senior Members check my outline...is it right or not????

Outline:

1) Introduction
2) Women In Islam


Dear member! Search a few pages back, i have mentioned my point of view, which might be wrong as every candidate has his/her own justification for what he/she has written in the paper.

thanks Fortune...i've read ur all comments...and u r quite right...evryone has his/her own justification...

if i were to opt for this topic, i would have written this way, but i opted for Hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state.