ifa u intend to be a csp,than how can you justify all evils without proof.
My mentor,that gained 5 position in 2008 told me,be pakistan,pour material that will not against the country.as his frnd awaraded "0" ,but passed other subjects.reason is sentimentalism.
2nd ,y u deal controversial topics..if u have no chance,than work on fact.
Can u imagine,its a essay in which subject and object is not known.as politicians are forget ful.which ?name politichian..
Who want to investigate?
I just quote one example there are blunders in it..
If u want to say about bhutto,than sort the media,where the corruption,evil...mentioned.quote the saying of famous personality..any .or site regarding forgetful ness also,matter in which forgetful ness is shown.

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