@sadiya...

Kindly tell us how objectively you could treat this particular essay ????

ifa u intend to be a csp,than how can you justify all evils without proof.
My mentor,that gained 5 position in 2008 told me,be pakistan,pour material that will not against the country.as his frnd awaraded "0" ,but passed other subjects.reason is sentimentalism.
2nd ,y u deal controversial topics..if u have no chance,than work on fact.
Can u imagine,its a essay in which subject and object is not known.as politicians are forget ful.which ?name politichian..
Who want to investigate?
I just quote one example there are blunders in it..
If u want to say about bhutto,than sort the media,where the corruption,evil...mentioned.quote the saying of famous personality..any .or site regarding forgetful ness also,matter in which forgetful ness is shown.

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yes you are right because your so called mentors established these ideas in your mind and your perceptions are accordingly.
i may tell you if you are displaying a creative trait in your attempt you may produce a persuasive appeal to the assessors. if you are trying to write on the topic that no one dared to attempt and you are giving a rhetoric treatment to it. stay assured that checker is arrested......
itz game of healthy arguments and examples....................
dont believe me just experience it by urself.

dun count on what mentors etcetra etcetra tell....
every one has his own experience based on his particular capablities..

first,name with calmness.i am sadia.
U did not fully comprehend what i said.i asked the blunder is narration.will you create a story without characters and action of story would be also unkown...
So...apka pata he ap fazol behus kar rae hen.

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sadia shafiq@ you rightly said that this is a sentimental one; in it frustration is implied.you also righlty said that points should be proved with solid arguments.but i think those points should be proved which are controversial and which have more than one side.mine are not controversial;who can deny that there is accountability in pakistan? will you disagree with me that there is lack of education in pakistan? in there no feudalism in pakisatn?

u know lack of education,
bad government,
yes,all know these issues.
But essay and poetry are two different things .poetry may be sentimental.but essay work on logic,logic works with facts..
So put some research to prove the fact..
Dear brother,
work on outline,
also ideas fabricated out line should be knitted in essay.have you studied articles.
Study dawn to borrow style

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sadia shafiq-sister is this a quotational essay or a general topic?i mean is this a poetry? and yes sister i read articles regularly and i know the pattern of these articles...as far as your emphasis on research is concerned, i attempted essay on natural resources and their management in 2010 and followed my own method-similar to this essay(no research work)-and got through it.......i think essay is all about justifying the topic.if the statement is justified and language is acceptable, one may pass the essay.....anyways sister if you were checker of my essay, how many marks you would give me?

sadia or sadiya... are pronunciated alike na !!!!!! ? tu!

i just told you how i felt personally on that particular point.. i did not force my views on those of yours.

i am a bit afraid how cud you employ patience in papers despite so aggressive style of replying to people........

ap samajhti hyn css forum par time pass karny aya hon !!!!!!!!

wesay 20/7 formal rahinay waly bhe to depression kay he shikar hojatay hyn at the end of the day.

sadia shafiq-sister is this a quotational essay or a general topic?i mean is this a poetry? and yes sister i read articles regularly and i know the pattern of these articles...as far as your emphasis on research is concerned, i attempted essay on natural resources and their management in 2010 and followed my own method-similar to this essay(no research work)-and got through it.......i think essay is all about justifying the topic.if the statement is justified and language is acceptable, one may pass the essay.....anyways sister if you were checker of my essay, how many marks you would give me?

when i jumped through narrative of your people,i wonder where i apply agrressive style...
@purepak
check your style of latest answer.ur ans.marks according to your statement..
@faraz
you have asked about it.i judged it objectively.look i have no enemity with you.

As far as your answer is concerned..essay writing is prose form.
Prose form was started when royal society was established during the reign of charles 2 in 17 century.that was the out come of scientific discoveries.essay writing needs scientific way to develop a theme...2nd when you are confused yourself than why are pointing two sided to justify,.as you do not know why wage war? Why american intervention?why assassination? Than why u said some says it was due to. . . . . . Ans some says . . . .
And nothing else.if u mind my comments than sory for that

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