u know lack of education,
bad government,
yes,all know these issues.
But essay and poetry are two different things .poetry may be sentimental.but essay work on logic,logic works with facts..
So put some research to prove the fact..
Dear brother,
work on outline,
also ideas fabricated out line should be knitted in essay.have you studied articles.
Study dawn to borrow style

__________________
"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"