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Psychological Causes of unhappiness
There are various causes of unhappiness but the main is deprivation of basic rights in childhood. A person becomes pessimist and sad forever. It increases its lust of pleasure so he seeks it everywhere. In order to get it, one opts wrong means to please him but all went in vain. Author says the only way to make him happy is to pursue him and make him optimistic and make him believe that happiness can be achieved another time. Fewer of them are aware to become happy so they seek happiness in their sadness. This makes them happy and they being sad live happy life.
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@Faheemjani-Your title is perfect and you began your precis excellently but after start of your precis, your precis has become vague. There are 4 causes of unhappiness in the original question but you have discussed only one cause,that is deprivation in childhood.
The original question also contains one solution of unhappiness but there is no need to discuss it in the precis because your title does not allow you to discuss it.
Moreover, your precis should have 120 words(360/3) but you wrote only 105.I am not sure whether the examiner would deduct marks for this mistake.