Originally Posted by aariz

5. He/she
6. incorrect use of AS
7. Why praxis. Use practice or performance and another easier word
8. Moderate is the correct use
9 first k baad comma.
10. punctuation error
11. mankind MILA kar likho.
12. a young one an extremist. beta.. idhar article mistake hai.
13. of extremist: an article must be used here
14. situations it punctuation missing
15. it is wrong use of pronoun
16. Instead : Write INDEED or ACTUALLY

Originally Posted by candidguy

@Ultimate CSP

I'm not a in a position to advise you,for I myself make so many mistakes while writing.But if I were asked to advise you,then I would say,"Go to Exploring the world of English and master The Punctuation".Start writing once you've mastered it.Secondly,while writing try not to use pretentious words,and also try to avoid platitude.(those days are gone when people got impressed by high-sounding words,today they provoke ridicule rather than admiration~saadat shah)

This is the advice,I've chosen for myself and for you.

regards.

Originally Posted by candidguy

If you really feel like using these bombastic words,then I would advise you to learn Idioms instead,and use them in your writing,as idiomatic English sounds familiar and will benefit you.