Originally Posted by aariz

5. He/she
6. incorrect use of AS
7. Why praxis. Use practice or performance and another easier word
8. Moderate is the correct use
9 first k baad comma.
10. punctuation error
11. mankind MILA kar likho.
12. a young one an extremist. beta.. idhar article mistake hai.
13. of extremist: an article must be used here
14. situations it punctuation missing
15. it is wrong use of pronoun
16. Instead : Write INDEED or ACTUALLY

Originally Posted by candidguy

@Ultimate CSP

I'm not a in a position to advise you,for I myself make so many mistakes while writing.But if I were asked to advise you,then I would say,"Go to Exploring the world of English and master The Punctuation".Start writing once you've mastered it.Secondly,while writing try not to use pretentious words,and also try to avoid platitude.(those days are gone when people got impressed by high-sounding words,today they provoke ridicule rather than admiration~saadat shah)

This is the advice,I've chosen for myself and for you.

regards.

Originally Posted by candidguy

If you really feel like using these bombastic words,then I would advise you to learn Idioms instead,and use them in your writing,as idiomatic English sounds familiar and will benefit you.

Originally Posted by Ultimate CSP

Impossible is some thing which can never come about and nothing on this earth is so. Mankind can beat whatever it essay. This cosmos is a mystery and how much human being strains to puzzle out it, it can chance upon that much of it. Human being is tycoon of this universe and how much it wants to have shift in this foundation it can have by clambering. When a man claims a target as unachievable, marks a mystery as unresolvable and titles risker conditions as inconceivable it stands to reason that he/she is not fighting. What is never called in question is out of question.

To clear up the idea with the help of as ordinary example as of a general who has given up, assumes that it is unimaginable to overcome his rivals. A dull student, for instance, takes it impossile to get the distinguish as he/she believes that it is insufferable. In fact he/she never tries to get it. Even an interovert can get the gift on the gab. Nothing in this world is impossible.
If we dive deep in the history of the mankind we come up that every impossible of one epoch is the possible of the next one. In past times, for instance, to cure Malaria was inconceivable but scientist tried its hand to discover a treatment and carried all before it. European, for another example never tried to expose new sea routs to India an d China. But when they tried by sending expedition to come across the new trade route, they lighted upon it. To be at the moon was a dream but journey to moon took it to taste. When one tries to trimuph an impossible, it remains so no longer. Every thing is possible.

We close with many things as impossible. Look up today's impossibles. Life on sun, for example, is not possible because no one ever called it in question. How ever when ever it will be, it will go off well in long run.

Going upon above examples it turns out that impossible is impossible because it is not being tried to make it possible. When it is tried it no longer remains impossible.

Mark out mistakes please

Originally Posted by striver

Ultimate CSP, here goes my 2 cents.

I think at this stage, you should aim for lucid writing and smooth/continuous flow of thoughts. I notice that your transition of ideas or topic is rather abrupt which should be avoided at all costs.

I hope this helps.

Originally Posted by zaineb

to Ultimate CSP

Hi i am a PMS aspirant , I read your post regarding English teacher Could you please tell me the contact details of Sir Shaffat of GCU. Actually i live in Samanabad and it would be convinent for me to join classes from him.

thank you very much

Regards
zaineb

Originally Posted by Ultimate CSP

To define extremism is quite tricky. In oecumenical way it can be defined as hard and fast obligation of self made values and rules. There is an interesting aspect that no one anticipates itself as extremist. This term is always used for out group by members of a specific group.

If we dive deep in the conceptual world we may come with that extremism can be in any sphere of life. A buff, for example, who self annihilates itself due to failure in getting love is an extremist. A student, for an other example, who says good bye to its studies as it stayed fail to achieve a certain target in exams. A politician mostly in case of a dictator who implies its policies with out agreement of senate, also falls in the category of extremism. There are as many varieties of extremists as many spheres of life.

Religion is no exception of it. Bajrang Dal, for instance, are Hindu who profess utter most practice of their faith. The movie "Slumdog Millionaire" well explains this approach in Hinduism. Christians who follow traditional old testament are labeled with this tag. Islam has exception of all as praxis of other religion's fundamental virtues is extremism while in case of Islam it is moderators.

Review of psychology of extremist demonstrates that it has its own world. It interacts with outer world for two reasons. First being its primary needs i.e. food etc. and second being the wish to manipulate the outer world.

With a bit philosophical and scientific approach it can be articulated that extremism is a virus and man kind is carrier of it. This virus requires feasible environmental conditions at young age to flourish. If it gets proper conditions, it grows and makes a young one an extremist.

If we have a look at symptoms and conditions of extremist, we may infer that it is suffering either from Alexithynia or Autism Spectrum Disorder. In some severe situations it may suffer lack of empathy and even Psychopathy.

Stop labeling buffs, failures, dictators and suicide bombers as crazy and cruel. Instead they deserve our sympathy. They need Psychopathology.Correction please....