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Originally Posted by Ultimate CSP View Post
Impossible is some thing which can never come about and nothing on this earth is so. Mankind can beat whatever it essay. This cosmos is a mystery and how much human being strains to puzzle out it, it can chance upon that much of it. Human being is tycoon of this universe and how much it wants to have shift in this foundation it can have by clambering. When a man claims a target as unachievable, marks a mystery as unresolvable and titles risker conditions as inconceivable it stands to reason that he/she is not fighting. What is never called in question is out of question.

To clear up the idea with the help of as ordinary example as of a general who has given up, assumes that it is unimaginable to overcome his rivals. A dull student, for instance, takes it impossile to get the distinguish as he/she believes that it is insufferable. In fact he/she never tries to get it. Even an interovert can get the gift on the gab. Nothing in this world is impossible.
If we dive deep in the history of the mankind we come up that every impossible of one epoch is the possible of the next one. In past times, for instance, to cure Malaria was inconceivable but scientist tried its hand to discover a treatment and carried all before it. European, for another example never tried to expose new sea routs to India an d China. But when they tried by sending expedition to come across the new trade route, they lighted upon it. To be at the moon was a dream but journey to moon took it to taste. When one tries to trimuph an impossible, it remains so no longer. Every thing is possible.

We close with many things as impossible. Look up today's impossibles. Life on sun, for example, is not possible because no one ever called it in question. How ever when ever it will be, it will go off well in long run.

Going upon above examples it turns out that impossible is impossible because it is not being tried to make it possible. When it is tried it no longer remains impossible.

Mark out mistakes please
1. whatever it essay? essay is a noun. ambiguous meaning here
2. Write a man or HUMAN BEINGS.
3. Punctuation error
4. article mistake. Write A before tycoon and tycoon is not a suitable word here.
5. a comma before AND
6. a comma before IT
7. risker.. Risk taker hota hai.
8. Full stop before IT
9. No use of AS. Correction: with the help of an ordinary example of an army general.
10. the gab Correct: on a gab
11. a comma be inserted before WE
12. a comma before BUT
13. correction: the scientists tried their hands
14. a comma before NEVER
15. THE before MOON
16. use present perfect
17. HOWEVER
18. However k baad comma
19. A comma before IT
20. Use simple present tense. Correction: impossible remains impossible because it is not tried to make it possible.
21. A comma before IT.

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