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Originally Posted by Rajai View Post
thanx...
it is just a start. i tried to use simple vocabulary. is there any grammatical mistake?
nope... u remember sir Bukhari's expansions? they were so simple and digestible... so all what u need is to simplify the meanings of the saying. keep the usage of MOTAY words for essay here simple vocab is needed and if u have used so its good. u may differ with my opinion
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