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It is easy to find fair-weather friends in life. you can have innumerable friends as long as your stars are ascending and you are in affluent position. These friends can not be considered as trustworthy. they are with you because they have their own Axe to grind.they will leave you as soon as your circumstances start deteriorating. On the other hand, a true friend stands by you in all weathers. he proves to be a guide in adversity. He encourages you and restores your confidence at the time when your morale is at the lowest ebb. He becomes dejected when you are in pain and leaves no stone unturned to provide you with relief. These are the rough diamonds who criticize you when you are on a wrong way.Sincere friends are distinguished from good weather friends in the hard times of life. so, a person who remains with you in need is a friend indeed.
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good attempt but it could b more comprehensive. there are a few such friends who prove to be the best in hard times, the FAIR WEATHER friends are not friends indeed and one can judge them in small matters of life. BDW it was good but too short
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good attempt but it could b more comprehensive. there are a few such friends who prove to be the best in hard times, the FAIR WEATHER friends are not friends indeed and one can judge them in small matters of life. BDW it was good but too short
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it is just a start. i tried to use simple vocabulary. is there any grammatical mistake?
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it is just a start. i tried to use simple vocabulary. is there any grammatical mistake?
nope... u remember sir Bukhari's expansions? they were so simple and digestible... so all what u need is to simplify the meanings of the saying. keep the usage of MOTAY words for essay here simple vocab is needed and if u have used so its good. u may differ with my opinion
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nope... u remember sir Bukhari's expansions? they were so simple and digestible... so all what u need is to simplify the meanings of the saying. keep the usage of MOTAY words for essay here simple vocab is needed and if u have used so its good. u may differ with my opinion
ya i read sir Bukhari's expansions for guidance but i used my own words.......
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ya i read sir Bukhari's expansions for guidance but i used my own words.......
anyway thanx for your comments
sorry if u got it so.. i dint mean that u have copied from anybody... i never meant that its not your personal effort.
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