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Hi xaara..
You have an impressive expression,and your usage and correctness of English language is also more than satisfactory.So,no real issues on this front.
This is a topic of sociology.I don't think such 'highly technical' essay topics come in the CSS exams.At least I haven't seen one.Try attempting more realistic,exam based topics.
The paragraphs that you have made are far too small.This gives a childish impression to the paper checker.Paragraphs should be of a good size,and the first line should be self explanatory as to the content of the paragraph.Also,it is always good to have seamless continuity between the paragraphs.This can be done if in the last line of ur paragraph,u can drop a hint as to the topic of the next paragraph.
Of course u would know that essay in CSS should be of 2500-3500 words.That length should come to you with time.
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