Hello Razi,

You are doing very well, and believe me you are off to a good start. The feedback you have received is very helpful, however I would like to add one vital point. Try to focus on the topics which have a clear subject matter. For example; " Why there is Gender Discrimination in Pakistan or World?" Here in the above given case you will find your answer molding to the question "why". Hence it will be easy for you to be to the point. Once you have learned the art then you can focus on any topic more accurately.

Thank You!

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