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Title: Psychoses and Neuroses

Prècis:
Psychoses and neuroses are the psychological disorders characterised by inclination of behaviour towards an extreme, rendering ego completely partial. In psychoses, ego is shettered altogether as a result of conflict between the desired and unachievable goals. Consequently, one is compelled to become socially deviant. Whereas the severe mental disorders show a complete loss of self-control, only one of the mental processes overwhelms the others in less severe forms. Thus, man is prohibited from realising his potentialities. Here, culture plays little role since man is in conflict only with his self. Therefore, neuroses is a very strange behaviour which is, regardless of its sociological description, determined by imbalance in personality rather than cultural norms.