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Originally Posted by atifch
not even mine is discussed..do tell me if ma conception was right or wrong?
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Atifch you have condensed the passage in a best possible manner and I m really impressed by your writing style but for precis writing you have to follow the limit of 1/3 and you havent followed it. So I m waiting for your another effort and do hope you will add it soon.
Actually I have started the thread as two way learning process, I will learn from you and will tell you the things I know. So if any of the members find some mistake in my work his or her correction would be highly appreciated.
Saturday will be the last day then we will move to another precis passage.
Regards