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Passage: Understanding of dictatorship and democracy are so important in social sciences generally and for us in this book in particular not because of their nature as of two types of governance regime, but because of their nature as of two different systems of property relations and therefore because of all applications, which they create for the state property. The problem with the state property is not only that it is so colossal and influential, but that whosoever controls State property and State revenues simultaneously acquires straightforward exclusive right on utilization of the mechanism of the power and coercion. Furthermore, whosoever controls State property, State revenues and mechanism of power and coercion is the single real informal proprietor of the State, all other people being inadequate, imaginary and idealized proprietors. Who owns or who controls in the State property and first of all who controls those mechanisms of power and coercion is a rather complicated issue thoroughly concealed by the entire social infrastructure throughout the entire human history. Already this fact of concealment is raising or at least should raise a lot of suspicions. Another problem with the state property is that not only it is associated with the largest ever monopoly based on power and coercion, but much more important in fact it is a final instance of power and coercion in any society. The problems with the State proprietorship by and large are underlying the deficiency of any society. With the whole truth about inadequacy of society hurts not only all the non-socialized interest in particular society, but might harm a lot of socialized interest as well. Because of that, too many prefer to think not too much or too deep about such a tricky subject as the State proprietorship and its applications. However since the State is one of the main, the most powerful and the most determinative part of the society, without understanding of the nature of State proprietorship we will never be able understand the nature of any society.
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Precis: Comprehension of democracy and dictatorship is significant due to their disparate mode of property correspondence for state property. The one who controls the state’s land and income becomes all powerful through employment of might muscle and compulsion and act as absolute monarch. The mysterious question of know how of controller is perplex and is always secreted by whole social structure all over the personage history. This ownership signifies the shortcoming of any society which when further exposed could alienate and tender both non socialized and socialized stake so people prefer not to ponder over this delicate issue. Complete apprehension of state ownership nature is associated only with knowledge of instincts of society. (Total Words – 112)

Title :- Understanding State proprietorship