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Old Sunday, December 24, 2006
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Originally Posted by dr.junaid
jam sahib,great devotee of cricket, made brilliant records with a fine average of score.unlike other batsmen, he gives his all while bating on the ground.he is an enthusiastic spectator of the cricket further more he is respected in his principality because of cricket.
Dr Junaid you have to take care of word limits you have flow of writing but your précis is not according to the word limit. Hope you will understand. I m going to add analysis of the passage so you can check it out and afterwards you can add your work.
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