Thread: Mein Pal do Pal ka shayir hun..Pal do pal meri Kahani hai:)
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may tere dar pay jukao'n ga sir ko ay khaliq
zara sa aur muje hijr mai ro lene dai

jo paarsa hoon teri talb may to chahta hoon
zara see maiy apnay hath sai pee lene dai

mekada hai kay bayaban hai tera dar saaqi?
Ek daur chala! Mujh ko bhi jee lene dai

meri misaal hai us muttaqi rindan see danish
jo khud to pee lai auron ko na pee lene dai


danish jamal khan
دانش اچھی کوشش ہے آپ کی ۔ قافیہ کا خیال رکھیں ۔ پی اور رو ہم آواز الفاظ نہیں ۔ وزن بھی ٹھیک معلوم نہیں ہوتا ۔ ۔آپ لکھتے رہیے ۔امید ہے جلد ہی بہت اچھا لکھنے لگیں گے
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