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Old Monday, November 14, 2011
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Originally Posted by zareenkhan View Post
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HOPE IS THE WAY OF LIFE.

Hope is one of the most delicious ingredients of life. It defines the ways on which life is led. It is only hope that encourages people to acheive their desired aims. For defeated, it is the only power that enables them to stand once again in the face of tyranny. For destitutes, it is the only thing they possess. Hope, therefore, constitutes the way of life.

One of the most characteristic attributes of hope is encouragement. It prompts people into translating their dreams into reality. Hope provides them energy to walk along the thorny tracks of life. It means that where there is hope, there is a struggle. For instance, there was a hope among the people of India to live freely. They desired a homeland without foreign domination. In order to acheive independence from British, everyone struggled in the way of freedom. Thus, it can be said that hope compells people to struggle for their lives.

Not only this, hope is one of the finest panacea for the wounds inflicted upon people by time. When people are defeated, it is only hope that makes them fight once again. History bears unmistakable testimony to it. Japanese, say, were defeated in World War II. However, they did not lose their hope. Today, Japan is one of the major contributors to global economy. In such a way, hope plays a decisive role in the lives of people.

Therefore, importance of hope in life stands unquestionable. Hope determines the horizons of the progress and prosperity. Hope helps people overcome their fears and makes them inscribers of their own destiny. Hope lets people live their lives. Verily, hope is the way of life.
Sorry to say but your expansion has been very disappointing especially the lack or i should say the almost absence of coherence.
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